Once again the sweet bloom of love
The grateful feeling of being understood
More than two skins with flesh
Souled mates standing with their reflection
Did i think of unity?
Think of the pleasant obvious next move?
Did i not feel the invisible warm shoulder?
Touch the comfort and smell the warmth?
Heaven i did, received it packed in tiny messages
Those which melt in your heart
Leaving tingling freshness in your head
Urging belief to hold its guard
Change crept in, stars not favoring the energy
Arguments, pinches of doubt, pain, guilt
All in turmoil cracked the former intensity
Pieces from the magnet started to erode
Goodbye bids thrown by our hurt lips
Along came another mortal
Glimpses of their heart exchange seen
My bleeding returned heart & two other establish & join.
Once more my sorrowful eye emerged
Looking back seeking the behind direction
Yelling "Come back, come back"
Hand held out, a wait yet again.
12 comments:
it was really beautifull and more respectfull if it came from your heart..........
thanks boxer! ....
u are welcome..
Impressive.
You have some skills.
Chingoo....you have proved to be a Libran :-) sensitive heart, great writing skills....keep it up gundus.
Good one, seems u introspect a lot. If you could just try and add some rhyme, I am sure it would turn out awesome. Do give it a try.
hey
@ mohan ch..thanks!!
@ subin... this one is really not a poetry ..its just a collection of words which fell out..
'Two months before the rain'and 'Silver Bowl' are nice ones...Amey (Research firm telecon)..heh
thanks amey
Hey I like it! I think all mortals feel this way, one time or the other. I am sure being a part of FHS made us write well! Good job! :)
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