Aug 6, 2009

To the future

Try he said

It struck me hard

The three bold letters

Thee saw it why dint I?


My fingers tremble

To take the first step

Can I dare enough to make

An altering decision


I need to be a hero

But which one

The one who waits for the distress

Or should I be brave enough


I stand on the see saw

Not moving an inch

Right lies chaos confusion excitement

And the other comfort & sanity


And so it is

A standstill time

A non breathing one

A cowardly attempt.


No I want to move

I want to fly into skies unseen

Bathe in light experiences

Shall I, will I?

6 comments:

Ajith Pillai said...

well it doesn't look like a rambling..its more of an integrated marrow... Liked it very much..

And yea i would say Go ahead make a move...

Samir said...

Very nice writing reethika! Keep updating :)

Anonymous said...

Do not venture into something you do not even know one percent.
The one you seem to know is not one but two.. two souls far apart but together..for eternity.

Needed Ramblings said...

but thats wat give adventure in all our mundane lives dont u think!!

Abt the souls...not sure wat u talkin abt!

meenakshi said...

yes u shall....
its a qualm that can be calmed..the words that are mysterious that set the tone for mystery writing...ur flummoxoning that happens with every new venture shall portray the cowardice in u rather than the bravery coz..only when theres cowardice can u find the opportunity to exhibit bravery rt??,..be it future or mere venture in the form of adventure:):) ....good one..keep going.....

Anonymous said...

hmmm blogs wre good.........
dont be a looser...man..